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First five seconds reminded me of a flash game, later instruments are very Deus Ex-y. The melody at 0:40-1:00 could be better, again, can't articulate how.

>>97463
thanks we'll work on it, helps a lot

Way too much raisin going on and note timing is pretty bad, learn how to quantize notes on the piano roll or get rid of the weird delay effect from the drums

>>97299 (OP)
There's no structure nor melody so it's a complete failure. The very first notes are engaging because they have good harmony and it pulls you in like a Pokemon or FF battle, and then it's complete trash.
You need to understand the most basic theory. You need structure, and to give identity to your track you need some form of melody or chord progression.
Near the end it's like you're getting the hang of it but it's like 10% of genuinely objectively good ideas, and 90% is to be thrown away because it's worthless.
Of course don't take it as personal harsh criticism. Much respect to you, and I'm sure if you just focus a bit you'll make something actually good or even great (because you have a sense of harmony somewhere in that mix).

>>97800
>>97789
noted, thnx for detailed feedback
gives me a sense of direction where to go